Descriptive Text

A Person Important To You

Draft 

Physically 

Let me present my mother. She is a short person. She is in her mid 40s but she looks younger. She has long, wavy black hair, has a medium build and her skin is fair like a sun. I think that she is a beautiful woman, because her face has nice features. She has some freckles in her face and she has round hazel eyes like a beautiful landscape in the south, a fine nose and pretty smile like a baby. She always is well dressed but often wears sport clothes, because she likes jogging at the beach with m father or with me. 

Phychologically

My dear mother, she is very beautiful woman. I think that she is the best mother in the world. She is a very helpful person, because always helps other people and feels great with that. Although she often is a little bit angry person, is too funny, because she makes us laugh every day with new things. My mother is a very energetic woman. She goes jogging  three times every week. Most of the time, when i was a child, she sacrificed a lot for me, for this reason i think tht she is a brave and smart woman. Finally my mother is a very kind and easygoing person, because accepts the people without worry.

Reflection: 

I like to describe people, and if the person that you describe is someone that you know, it will be more easy for you. In this case, I chose to my mother, a person very important for me. 

In the first paragraph I had to describe her physically, something that yo can see, like the eyes, the nose, the mouth etc. But the other one, I had to describe her psychologically, standing out her qualities.

In this text I learnt how to keep in order my words following a sequence. Also, I have improved my vocabulary with new words that I didn't know.